Tuesday, July 10, 2018

Poem: Dusk



2 comments:

  1. A lot of alliteration skipping around. The poem has flow. ‘respite’ +++++

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  2. heh, one good thing about living in a blast furnace is that the vampires don't survive the sun, but on the down side, also no fireflies unless you count the flies that are literally on fire. :D

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